If I could talk to my main character I would tell him (John) to get his life together. He needs to stop drinking and smoking and stop being a bad influence on Lorraine. He should understand why all of this stuff that he does is bad. I would tell him this because he is ruining the rest of his life and affecting Lorraine's. He is very careless and doesn't care about anyone but his self. He should think about things before he does them, and he needs to think about the consequences that follow.
He always takes people for advantage, for instance Mr. Pignati and his money. He also made Lorraine go with him to Mr. Pignati's house before they even met the guy. He doesn't care if he is rude to her. He is ignorant, selfish, and careless. He needs to clean up his act if he ever wants to succeed in life. John is not very smart if he thinks this stuff is cool and fun. John needs to get his life together.
Great point I agree with the fact that he should stop with the drugs. And he does need to get his life together. Also I agree with the fact that he takes Mr. Pignati for granted.
ReplyDeleteYes, I do agree he needs to stop the drugs and get his life together. But you do have to understand he has grown up to smoking and is used to that. He has a rough life and that's effected him.
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